M18 what could I improve

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Does my eye area ruin my looks

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Anything wrong with my form
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Plyometrics
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My Obstacle
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Rest/sleep
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Genetics
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What do you see wrong in my form
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What’s harder?
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Top speed/Endurance
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Help
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Help Speed
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